Your Website Or Marketing Copy
Ripped To Shreds

Now you can receive a personalised (and brutally honest) video
critique from a top copywriter who’ll point out exactly what
needs to change to boost your conversion rate and sales!

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You’re here for one of two reasons.

  1. You have a great product or service, but the copy on your website, landing page video script, or email campaign is NOT generating enough leads or sales.
  2. You’re about to launch a new website or marketing campaign but you have a sinking feeling that your copy could be better.

You’re frustrated because you KNOW your copy is missing some of the important ingredients needed to really make it work …

If you only knew WHAT those ingredients were!

If you’ve ever wanted to have a top copywriter work on your copy … without paying thousands dollars for a full re-write … without sitting on a waiting list for weeks while they work on other projects. Then you’re in luck because now you can…

Get A Personalised Copy Critique From A
Top Copywriter And Conversion Expert

Now you can improve the conversion rate of your website and marketing, by hiring a top copywriter and conversion specialist to critique your copy on video!

For a full 60 minutes, I’ll tear apart your website or marketing copy, while recording the whole copy critique on video. You’ll feel like you’re sitting right next to me, looking over my shoulder, as I provide a thorough review of your copy and tell you exactly what to change to boost your conversion rate and response.

I’m available to critique most types of copy including:

  • Website copy
  • Landing pages
  • Video scripts (VSL’s)
  • Email campaigns
  • Sales pages
  • Direct mail
  • Print advertising

Book My Copy Critique

"Over 230 New Conversions Because We Listened To Your Feedback"

Hey Jesse, I just wanted to thank you again for your help. I’ve had over 230 new conversions just since sending an email campaign yesterday, 13 legit quote requests just on Monday alone even before I sent the email campaign and with nowhere near the traffic numbers I’m aiming for so our conversion rate is phenomenal! Over 50% of the ones that clicked through from my newsletter converted on site. So THANK YOU so much because we listened to your feedback and implemented a lot of the changes… Our bounce rate is already down 10%. Couldn’t be happier! Now our sales guys just need to keep up.

Why Should You Listen To Me?

My name is Jesse Forrest. I’m the founder and chief copywriter at Copywriting Crew. I’m regarded as one of Australia’s leading copywriters with over 10 years experience in writing copy for hundreds of satisfied clients from over 150 different industries.

I’m also a copywriting trainer and have shared my copywriting tips with thousands of business owners at conferences around the world, including the University of Southern California and recently in Hong Kong, Singapore and Sydney, Australia.

I’ve been hired by some of the worlds smartest marketers and entrepreneurs. From Jay Abraham (America’s #1 marketing adviser), Dr Demartini (from ‘The Secret’ movie), Alex Mandossian (founder of, and Dale Beaumont (author of 16 best selling business books).

What’s Included With Your Critique

  • Pre-critique questionnaire or interview to find out about your business
  • 60 minute recorded video critique of your website or marketing materials
  • New copy options – headlines, opening paragraphs, call-to-action for you to test
  • New design ideas: layout, navigation, usability, images, etc.
  • Actionable recommendations you can implement right away
  • Point out any flaws in your copy that could be sabotaging your sales


"Doubled Our Conversion Rate From $1,000 To $2,000 Per Month!"

Hi this is Kevin Tuck from the Fun Music Company. I don’t hire lots of copywriters, but I had Jesse do a video critique of one of our sales letters.
This site had been performing alright, averaging about $1,000 every month. However, with a few improvements Jesse suggested to the headline, opening body text and the guarantee, our website now turns over double what it was doing before, or about $2,000 a month.
Therefore, with a 100% improvement of our website, I wouldn’t hesitate to recommend Jesse for any copywriting project.

How To Order And Receive
Your Personalised Copy Critique

  • Simply place your order below by clicking the ‘add to cart’ button and after payment you’ll be directed to a secure page where you can download your client agreement, copywriting questionnaire and instructions on how to submit your copy to me.
  • From there, you’ll receive an email from me to organise a time for our 20 minute call to discuss your goals, business and the copy you want critiqued.
  • You’ll answer my copywriting questionnaire and email it to me (your answers will give me deeper insights into your target audience, business and offering).
  • I’ll record a 60 minute video critique of your chosen website or marketing copy, upload it to a private site, which I’ll give you access to.
  • I’ll write and send you new copy options (new headline, opening paragraph, call to action, design and layout suggestions, etc) for you to use and test.

"400% Increase In My Sales"

Thank you so much for your video critique, after I implemented what you suggested I made in one week more than what I used to make in 1 month that’s a 400% increase in my sales!
I really can’t thank you enough and I would definitely need your critiques for all my websites, you really helped me a lot by showing me exactly what I need to do to increase my sales. Your video critique is so in depth no hype or fluff, you were right to the point and it’s definitely worth every penny, highly recommended. Thanks again.

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